The story wasn't very good in my eyes. This young man , Adrian Peterson just broke a coveted NFL record. In my opinion the entire story should focus on Peterson and his accomplishment. Instead, the story strays away from Peterson and talks about other players that were in the game.
In a story like this, a reader doesn't care as much about what happened in the game as the individual record that was broken. The journalist could have given more background information on Peterson's college career. Also the record itself could have been discussed in more detail.
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